despair i agree.. but not so much as to lose the desire to live longer:)keep writing..best wishes
Hi Pygma.. he he..! Don’t worry its just desperate.. Not scary desperate.. yet! ;-)
Some relationships are purer than the common feelings man knows...loved these lines...Don’t name it affection.. the meaning is lost..Don’t call it friendship.. as I seek you only in pain..Don’t call it lust.. the purity is lost..Don’t call it infatuation..I never wanted u just for myself..Nor am I jealous when you are with others..Does it need to be defined..
Hey GWSP.. you are rite..! its complicated... :)Thanks a lot for the encouragement..!
I love the beginning of the poem,life does as it desires. A little sad but every word worth reading!
Hi Saru.. thanks a lot..! Happy that u liked it.. couldn't help with the melancholy... :)
The essence of excruciating loneliness is well expressed...I liked the metaphor of wild river...keep going:-)
Hey Nasnin.. Bit late this time!! :) Thank you dear.. I just wrote in mixed feeling.. happy that the post is not confusing.. ..
Yeah I was a bit busy dear....exams, seminars...that's why:-)
I rode with it.. beautiful melancholy! Nice post...
Hey Nasnin.. Hope u did well.. waiting for more updates from u da..Hi Dee.. thanks a lot for visiting and for encouraging.. It does mean a lot when thoughts connect!!
Hi KP, Enjoyed reading this...nice exploration..."Was that so much to ask?Why didn’t you come then…"That "you" will definitely come, just pray that that "you" does not leave...that pain is a wee bit tougher...Hey KP, enjoy reading you...pls keep writing,Arjun
Hey Arjun.. thank you.. look at you.. sitting some where and reading between the lines.. :) Let me just say that "That you is not the one you, that you thought is the you..."Got it????? he he
As always, very well expressed. :)