Saturday, December 24, 2011

A Rebel?


Louder they croak, harder I shriek
Shielding my ears tight, praying for spare hands..
Where reasoning is a God made blunder
This is humanities extreme stupid peril

They create.. they demand.. they stuff it up my head..
They forget to follow it.. labeling it as rules
In it I lost everything I had.. gone and depleted
But it survived in the flimsy thinning paper
 
It stayed arrogant, bossing the mightier humans
In hands that are obscured to truth
They say abide by it, I shield more
shrieking higher until I hear or see no more

The allergic epidemic crawls up to me
They tagged me a rebel
I run away, correcting…
A rebel fights.. I reject..
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15 comments:

  1. Christy GeraldDecember 24, 2011 at 6:53 PM

    Nicely Written!.Enjoyed!. Merry Christmas to U and thanks for Ur Wishes Dear.

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  2. magiceyeDecember 24, 2011 at 7:33 PM

    brilliant!
    powerful!

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  3. Nasnin NasserDecember 24, 2011 at 9:34 PM

    Rebel! You even rebel against that tag! A thought to ponder! Introspective! Beautiful intricate weaving of contemplation and elegant march of words! Sheer brilliance:)

    Wishing you a Merry X'mas and Happy New Year KP:)
    Lots of love:)

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  4. KParthasarathiDecember 25, 2011 at 5:01 AM

    An excellent depiction of a rebel from man made rigid rules that are Claustrophobic and oppressive.

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  5. --December 25, 2011 at 10:59 AM

    Bold and brilliantly penned! Bravo!

    Merry Christmas, dear :)

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  6. SameeraDecember 25, 2011 at 4:41 PM

    I love these poems of yours- if you notice there are more than one like these, where you beautifully pen down one against the commons. A Rebel- of a kind.

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  7. SameeraDecember 25, 2011 at 4:42 PM

    Merry Christmas! :D

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  8. AlcinaDecember 26, 2011 at 9:48 AM

    Powerful...and your penning always has something so unusual about them that they make me think always like very much!..Loved the whole thing..the way you put it up..expressed..got about..and left a question..and answered in puzzle..

    Belated merry christmas and an advance new year..
    tc
    Keep smiling always :)

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  9. MJDecember 26, 2011 at 10:08 PM

    Well written, challenging & thought provoking. Thank you Krishnapriya.

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  10. Rahul BhatiaDecember 28, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    A rebellious poetry!:)Happy New Year!

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  11. சேகர்December 29, 2011 at 1:07 PM

    I want dictionary to understand these lines..Finally i understand the meaing..This one take 15 minites for reading with understanding..Nice..

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  12. anatreekJanuary 2, 2012 at 3:08 PM

    High five to a fellow rebel!

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  13. UnknownJanuary 10, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    rebel without a cause huh? you should read about che.

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  14. RahulJanuary 14, 2012 at 10:08 AM

    Well written! :)

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  15. Sahana RaoJanuary 22, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    Brilliant. Out of words.

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