Wednesday, October 5, 2011

If our roads meet

The foot steps, the aura, the smell
Bred the familiarity ablaze
Forgetting the long said farewell
Glowing anticipation arose
 
Welcomed by the enigmatic smile,
I stare for, its picture perfect
I doubt reality, still you stand
Regretting the worthless fights

My face to you is a puzzle
and you turn away in disbelief
Leaving my heart in a dazzle
You move away fearing grief
 
Like a Greek goddess I remain,
Transfixed into a melancholic rock
Waiting for you to return when
Rejection or reconciliation is no bother!

Posted by at
Labels: , ,

25 comments:

  1. Saru SinghalOctober 5, 2011 at 7:52 AM

    Last paragraph is so beautifully worded. Lovely poem...

    ReplyDelete
  2. New NonentitiesOctober 5, 2011 at 10:45 AM

    "Waiting for you to return when
    Rejection or reconciliation is no bother!"

    Rejection or reconciliation should never be a bother...but it is, unfortunately...

    Fear grief and miss out on joy...

    nice set of thoughts...keep writing

    ReplyDelete
  3. Quirky WritesOctober 5, 2011 at 12:22 PM

    wow.......sometimes I feel too jealous that I can't write poem... :-)

    ReplyDelete
  4. MenacheryOctober 5, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    id second saru loved the last para

    ReplyDelete
  5. smiling soulOctober 5, 2011 at 2:06 PM

    the way you express is really fabulous! :)

    ReplyDelete
  6. RahulOctober 5, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    Very nice one! The last para steals the show!

    ReplyDelete
  7. RahulOctober 5, 2011 at 5:17 PM

    Now this I like..:-)

    ReplyDelete
  8. AnonymousOctober 5, 2011 at 7:41 PM

    Superb! The choice of words is too good KP :)

    ReplyDelete
  9. Nasnin NasserOctober 5, 2011 at 9:09 PM

    "Like a Greek goddess I remain,
    Transfixed into a melancholic rock
    Waiting for you to return when
    Rejection or reconciliation is no bother!"
    I am stilled like this transfixed melancholic rock by reading these lines! Simply superb!

    ReplyDelete
  10. AnonymousOctober 5, 2011 at 9:34 PM

    rejection and reconciliation...
    some times its better to have none....

    ReplyDelete
  11. சேகர்October 7, 2011 at 10:08 AM

    The line "my face to you is a puzzle" is suits for everything in my life...My wishes for your expressive writing...

    ReplyDelete
  12. WonderWallOctober 8, 2011 at 1:27 AM

    Like a Greek goddess I remain,
    Transfixed into a melancholic rock
    Waiting for you to return when
    Rejection or reconciliation is no bother!

    I'm kinda speechless... WOW!!

    ReplyDelete
  13. AnkurOctober 8, 2011 at 8:36 PM

    Wonderful play of words...
    It bridges the gap between confession and expectation so effortlessly !

    ReplyDelete
  14. KPOctober 9, 2011 at 12:46 AM

    Hey Saru - thanks dear.. that is my fav too..!

    Hello Mashe - it bothers only when it is not felt.. so no need to brood over a silly plight.. thanks for liking...

    Hey Sneha - should I smile.. hell yes.. I am smiling here..! u can try once.. and let us review it.. :)

    Hi Menachery - thanks dear..

    Hey Sowmya - thank you!!

    Hi Rahul - thanks for the visit and liking my words..

    ReplyDelete
  15. KPOctober 9, 2011 at 12:46 AM

    Hey rahul - thank you..

    Hi Bagya - thanks dear..

    hey Nasnin - thank you dear.. I felt that the last para stands out.. but it completes the story so left it as such! :)

    H Chintan - yep.. especially when it is not felt!

    Hi Sekar - life itself is a puzzle.. I agree with you..

    Hey Wonderwall - thanks dear..

    Hi Ankur - it does.. doesnt it..! ;) thanks!

    ReplyDelete
  16. AnandOctober 10, 2011 at 8:25 AM

    KP, the ending was too good and I loved it. The drum-roll had such an impact :)

    ReplyDelete
  17. Sahana RaoOctober 10, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    Stages of the emotions very nicely worded.

    ReplyDelete
  18. KPOctober 10, 2011 at 10:53 PM

    Hey Anand.. didnt like other lines? :)

    Hi Sahana - Thank you!

    ReplyDelete
  19. AnandOctober 11, 2011 at 8:32 AM

    @KP: haaah, not exactly. I like the full poem. Just that the ending is so good which made me comment like that... Its something like 'stealing the show'... How was your day KP?!! Just asking cos am giving explanation for my comment 2nd time here... heheheee :) :) :)

    ReplyDelete
  20. KPOctober 15, 2011 at 4:38 PM

    Hello Anand I am fine..! how are you? (I ask because I wanted to know.. he he you can always ask.. don't explain the explanation..) guess what I wrote those last 4 lines first and wrote the poem backwards..! have a nice day! :)

    ReplyDelete
  21. AnandOctober 15, 2011 at 6:52 PM

    heheheee...have a nice weekend KP... And have you read the posts about Chennai bloggers meet? (not on my blog but on fellow blogger's blog)... you'll envy for sure :) :)

    ReplyDelete
  22. KPOctober 15, 2011 at 6:59 PM

    Oh.. do u mind sharing the link? let me drench myself in jealousy..!

    ReplyDelete
  23. Megha SarinOctober 20, 2011 at 5:43 PM

    Beautiful <3

    The magnitude of the poem carved with well-crafted words is profound

    ReplyDelete
  24. :-DeeOctober 28, 2011 at 11:16 PM

    Lovely!! You have a nice flow of poetry... :)

    ReplyDelete
  25. KPNovember 6, 2011 at 1:51 AM

    Hi Megs - thanks for the visit and the lovely comment..

    Hey Dee- thanks dear..

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)