Saturday, August 27, 2011

Just go...


Good byes are heartless
Valedictory words are needless
Hugs and kisses seem soulless
Handshakes appear juvenile
So Just go..

Do not linger  for last glance
Or fumble for explanations..
For these are futile gestures
of something that never nurtures,
So just go..

Don’t brood over my plight
There would come a day
When your image fades
and withers from my mind…
Until then just go..

There would come a day
When I can overlook you in a crowd..
When I can stare into your eyes and smile
Without a pang or missing a beat
And walk away as mere stranger..
 until that day just go..

As you did today...!
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29 comments:

  1. Quirky WritesAugust 27, 2011 at 1:19 AM

    heart touching.... well done... :-)

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  2. KParthasarathiAugust 27, 2011 at 1:59 AM

    Touching lines expressing anguish.Beautiful indeed.

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  3. Blue LotusAugust 27, 2011 at 5:58 AM

    OMG..that was so beautiful..

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  4. KPAugust 27, 2011 at 8:14 AM

    Hi Sneha thank you..

    @ Partha - Thank you sir.. this also is ending with a positive note.. :)

    @ Blue - glad u liked it..!!

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  5. SameeraAugust 27, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    Nice! Liked the last para in particular- Strong.

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  6. AnandAugust 27, 2011 at 10:18 AM

    Very nice KP.. Last line is a surprise for me.. Didn't expect that :)

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  7. AnonymousAugust 27, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    Such kind of pain is difficult to bear. It takes a long time to get over it. Its tormenting.

    Beautifully written KP :)

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  8. Nasnin NasserAugust 27, 2011 at 1:15 PM

    The last para...so soul stirring! The tone of melancholy is well evident! Stirring piece KP dear:-)

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  9. MyKitchen Flavors-BonAppetit!.August 27, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    Dear KP, Very heart-felt words.Wonderful Work.Keep Blogging!.

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  10. KPAugust 27, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    Hi Sameera – Thank you.. when life is strong words become strong too.. :)

    @ Anand – thank u.. everything looks doable in writing.. he he

    @ Bhagya – yep.. I can understand, thank you..

    @ Nasnin – Stirring huh? Glad it was conveyed in right amount.. thanks dear..

    @ Christy – thanks a lot.. your encouragements are a pep up!!

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  11. SameeraAugust 27, 2011 at 6:53 PM

    Life is common. People are strong. Happy that you are one of them :)

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  12. Little HeartAugust 27, 2011 at 8:07 PM

    It was nice with positive thought and heart touching.. :-) ....

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  13. Saru SinghalAugust 27, 2011 at 9:23 PM

    A powerful one, I just loved it...

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  14. ViyomaAugust 28, 2011 at 7:47 AM

    Wow..that was good!! Indeed Good!

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  15. Aakash KokzAugust 28, 2011 at 10:20 AM

    Deep thoughts, keep writing ..

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  16. New NonentitiesAugust 28, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    KP,

    "...until that day just go..

    As you did today...!"

    That was a lovely build-up and the last line delivers a punch...the repetition of "just go" says the opposite "please don't go"...and of course, a type of catharsis...

    Keep writing!

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  17. KPAugust 28, 2011 at 3:01 PM

    Hey Sameera – yea.. we all are strong aren’t we? We get to know that only during tough times..

    @ Little heart, Saru, Viyoma – thanks a lot..!!

    @ Aakash – Thanks for the support and encouragement, I guess I will..

    @ Arjun – Yes.. when we read again, it is kind of self-cleansing.. or like a child repeating to herself at dark, not to panic.. Nice angle of thoughts you have..!

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  18. magiceyeAugust 28, 2011 at 5:00 PM

    can feel the rage...
    beautifully done!

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  19. AnonymousAugust 28, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    INTENSE..... and heart reaching.

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  20. KPAugust 28, 2011 at 10:24 PM

    Hey Magicye and Jojo - thanks a lot..!

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  21. AnonymousAugust 30, 2011 at 10:27 PM

    last para just killed me!

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  22. AnonymousAugust 30, 2011 at 10:27 PM

    btw, that meant i liked it :) very touching...

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  23. Sujatha SathyaAugust 31, 2011 at 1:57 PM

    walk away as a mere stranger......after all the things that have transpired in the past, the hurt, the anguish.....
    beautifully worded ....that person must be so in love....to say "just go"

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  24. aakashAugust 31, 2011 at 4:26 PM

    if at all it was that easy to go,..
    to ride the guilt,
    to confess the sin..
    to answer not the world, but self.

    aJ

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  25. KPSeptember 1, 2011 at 12:40 AM

    Hi Chintan - Thanks for the visit.. Its a success if it touched you..

    @ Sujatha - yep.. thanks.. I think so too..!

    @ Aakash - wow.. thanks for the visit.. and that verse looks like a reply to the poem here..! very nice..!

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  26. AnkurSeptember 7, 2011 at 8:06 PM

    I can appreciate the sentiment that went into writing this....
    Never been good at "happy endings" myself.....
    The question is - do you really want that day to come??

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  27. pygmalionSeptember 7, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    i dont know how i missed this one KP
    spellbound! loved it ..... and i mean it
    This is a classy one.. Keep going dear:)

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  28. KPSeptember 9, 2011 at 12:37 AM

    Hey Ankur - I wish i could answer positive.. but lets see..

    Hi Pygma - My personal critic.. I didnt know how u missed this either.. :) thanks a lot!

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  29. Rajendra raikwarDecember 5, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    I will surely come back for more

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